psicicle's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dont Try This At Home Vid]

just that little bit unpolished

This looks like some of my movies, graphically, I wish you used the pencil tool instead of the paintbrush because it looks a little pixelated and the backgrounds should almost always use a thicker line than the things at the foreground, so don't use 1-point lines. In fact, until you get good at drawing (as in as good as something on TV), use something thicker for lines. I find that a clean way of drawing is to use the line tool and bend and minipulate the lines until they become the shape you want. Hope you found this review useful.

TheOriginalAnimatEd responds:

The pencil tool isn't as effective for freehand and FBF. A thicker background would bring more attention to the background than to the characters, and the backgrounds (despite being more appealing than in my previous Flashes) are terrible.

[Endgame]

first flash?

wow... this is really good for ure first flash, mine was much worse (though I only made it in a day)

StrikerF2 responds:

thanks, unfortuantley, it might not be around for long, other people dont seem to think it was as good

[Fire collab]

pretty good

this must have taken a really long time to make! What you should do is add color, and it would be set apart from all those other random fbfs, this one is already very good

keep it up and add a plot!

FatonWheels responds:

haha the olor one is on its way

[Just Something]

pretty good

This is good but I really am getting tired of seeing all this random fbf. What you need to do is make something with a plot.

MYEZinc responds:

i would but i dun have voice actors and everytime i do a plotted music vid then i get super bored with it

[Couple of shorts tribute2]

a little strange

good graphics, very strange. you should make a stick fight or something.

FelleAndersson responds:

I'm working on a stick fight movie. If u want to see one made by me, check out "The Black revenge"